New Ideas

During our lesson we received feedback from our teachers and we also came up with new ideas. the feedback from both of our teachers was the same, we need to have more of a reaction form from our female actor Charli when she is in the bed, our group agreed with this and have decided to go away and re-shoot this clip in a different way in order to create a more realistic feel. We also needed more of a obvious story line there fore came up with new ideas to help us with this. Together we came up with the idea of the girls mother and father being involved in the opening, this would have them being interviewed or being shown on the television we thought about ways we could show this and came across a clip of 'Doctor Who' where a similar technique was used. If you skip to 3:07 the use of the tv is shown. We would have the girls parents talking directly into the camera, to show that they are addressing the viewers, half way through this we would then have the man turn off the tv to show he does not care even though he knows that the girl they are looking for is in his house.

We thought the television was a good idea but soon realised it would be difficult to do so decided to work on the interview idea. This would involve a police man asking the girls parents basic questions like when she last saw her daughter ect. This would involve a meeting in a small room similar to a police mans office were they would talk about the missing girl. This will help us to get our opening up to 2 minutes and will help build the story line to make it more exciting.

We also came up with another idea to help build the story line of our film. We will use this if we cant our idea of the interview doesn't work out or if we need more clips. This was to have a newspaper article on the from page regarding the missing girl. On the article we would have a picture of the girl in the dress that she is wearing in the shots of her in the bed, this will allow the audience to relate the girl on the newspaper to the one in the clips. We will have the man reading the newspaper for about 3/4 seconds and then have him throw it one a table as if he doesn't care, a similar thought to the tv scene.